See The Fishes Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

See The Fishes



You are not going down
With wine unknown
That may bring you down with intoxication
Certainly a bad indication

Whatever may be the reason!
You should know the consequence as person
This is not last resort
You need not adopt this sort

You go to nature
Watch around for sure
You will find many creatures
Ready to fly for new ventures

See the fishes in pond
With no thoughts second
Still they swim with joy
You can too enjoy

Life must have some ambition
With innovative inhibition
That shall open your hunger
Push away fatigue with no more anger

Tuesday, September 16, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

I like the message Todd Vanisacker1 hour ago Some of the phrases seemed forced, but that could just be me going on no sleep for three days.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2014

You are not going down With wine unknown

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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