Tiku akp


Saying goodbye


Someday you can’t find a chance
To wink from behind your window
When onto the pyre I will be laid
My existence will be gone as a shadow

You can’t even hear me sing the song
You had written to immortalize our love
The earth will feel dry like a desert
When your soul tries to meet mine above

Your eyes will not feel dry ever
Your lips won’t stop calling my name
Memory of love will remain for a while
The lull would descend to finish the game

You will be shining with a new star
That would rise to bring a love sublime
The chapter will start from page one again
When both of you will walk on the sands of time

Submitted: Saturday, September 07, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 09, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Saying goodbye by Tiku akp )

  • Bronze Star - 7,217 Points Neela Nath (9/9/2013 8:53:00 PM)

    How beautifully you depicted the ultimate truth! 10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Princess Lilypad (9/8/2013 7:54:00 AM)

    True adoration, interesting take on separation. Beautifully stated. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/7/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    Oh My God..If its just bye for time being ok..But this good bye is something different..
    But the way you have expressed is very beautiful..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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