Satisfaction (Acrostic) Poem by Brooke Peterson
Satisfaction (Acrostic)
Say you'll never leave me.
All my life be true.
Trust is the question.
Intuition is the answer.
Someday you promise.
Fun isn't the same to me.
Acting verses doing.
Cut straight to the chase.
Time is flying by.
Incomplete isn't good enough.
Only you and I can see.
Never is when, Satisfied I will be.
Nice acrostical penning, young lady....If i could make 1 suggestion for your consideration...remove the period points, and just parenthesize(Acrostic) next to the title...Readers will pick-up the alpha-pattern.Again...nice work! F j R
OH, OH i just left a comment, but it didn't go through so here again-it's a heartbreaking acrostic poem...as i said in the unprinted one before you better go find that house :) -lots of emotion here! Good poem!
oh, oh, heartbreak acrostic poetry....uh, you better go find that house ;) lots of emotion here-VERY NICE!
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Ahhh..... 'la dame très bien faite et jeune....Simpatico now, indeed, both structurally & aesthetically! F j R