It was a time gone by
a time with no goodbye
but I left you
in the sand and the wind
You gave me your hand
but I couldn't hold on
you was taken
by the winds of time
Sands of time
blowing in the wind
when will they come for me
when will they come for me
I see your soul
dancing in the sands of time
I hold out my hand
but I just feel the sand and the wind
god forgive me
I can't go on
living in a world I don't belong
see my soul flying in the night
I will find you
no matter how long
I will find you
Sands of time
blowing in the wind
when will they come for me
when will they come for me
DAVE my dear friend and poet! Yes you are a nice painter of feelings! Your brush strokes are smooth and dances like a ballet dancer! We are proud of you!
Its a poem of forbidden love...so it seems to me...or am I reading it wrong...as for Denis...hmmm...you could of at least messaged him in private...as for the poem...its quite poetic and lovely....i think its brillant
this seems like a song with the repetition of lines and the sand and the wind are so symbolic and your asking them when will they come for you is an act of bravery seems like you are not afraid to die
good poem written with great skills.keep it up.you are there
nice poetry Berry, i think I understoood a little but not much because you may have a hidden meanings.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Poem sounds like, a loved one is gone and you wish to go with him, through sand of time, who comes to takes away anything, good job! ! !