hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Rise Of Sun - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I have always wondered
And many times ventured
To know more about blazing sun
With full of energy and never short of run

How come one body remains?
With constant energy sans drain
Nothing changes in schedule timing
Same appearances in morning with no delay in evening

I tried to know about legend stories
All religion books are full mysteries
Yet it is centuries old tale
No one fears about it to fail

How can we survive?
If sun fails to arrive
Even for a single day
It is simply imagined way

I think it may then be over
The end of the universe can be called near
No life can survive without its existence
That is we all pray for its presence

Many religions do believe in rising sun
Many people worship setting of the sun
Besides source of energy and power
The mother earth may be starved of rainy showers

It is all about super show
Winds to gently blow
The lord has made it only for us
We should love to live peace and trust


Comments about Rise Of Sun by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 44,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2015 7:21:00 PM)

    Great poem. I really was slayed by this masterpiece
    2 Jun by Midnight Clarity to The rising of the day (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/28/2014 12:34:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem with good message. Very true said without sun, earth... we are no where. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    the sun holds true


    Mat Murray4 minutes ago
    Good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/28/2014 6:28:00 AM)

    Love to live, peace and trust, good writing, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 6:17:00 AM)

    I have always wondered
    And many times ventured (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 28, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, February 28, 2014


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