ramesh rai

Gold Star - 19,416 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Rise And Fall - Poem by ramesh rai

In emotion
i rise above the sky
but when i fall
i fall deep down the sea

the rise and fall
in rythem of my life
i feel myself like sothic
sobering to rotate

to rotate with a timeless motion
to cheer the glimpse of profound creation
with full devoutness and homunculus
like an insatiate and maginot-minded

the harsh of my life is inordinate
unable to finish donet of my life
retrograding all fusses
and demuting passion
adding geomatrically
in propagation of life

ooziness of my all lust transcend
to manifest supplantation of my attachment
trying to be free from all lives
and to be attached with eternal soul

Comments about Rise And Fall by ramesh rai

  • Freshman - 640 Points marvin brato (10/28/2013 8:51:00 AM)

    Soulful expression.... poetic approached! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,204 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/8/2013 7:12:00 AM)

    Trying to be free from all lives, no more thoughts of rise and fall. Beautifully delivered. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/6/2013 1:20:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem..Yes, a rise and fall in emotions. finally trying to be free from all live and to be attached to the eternal soul.. Great message. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,160 Points Neela Nath Das (9/6/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    Faeo is right.this one is didactic and of course beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Chukwuma Ndububa (9/5/2013 10:30:00 PM)

    Fine layers. Didactic still. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, September 6, 2013

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