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(13.12.1955 / howrah)

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Rise and fall

In emotion
i rise above the sky
but when i fall
i fall deep down the sea

the rise and fall
in rythem of my life
i feel myself like sothic
sobering to rotate

to rotate with a timeless motion
to cheer the glimpse of profound creation
with full devoutness and homunculus
like an insatiate and maginot-minded

the harsh of my life is inordinate
unable to finish donet of my life
retrograding all fusses
and demuting passion
adding geomatrically
in propagation of life

ooziness of my all lust transcend
to manifest supplantation of my attachment
trying to be free from all lives
and to be attached with eternal soul

Submitted: Thursday, September 05, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 06, 2013


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  • marvin brato (10/28/2013 8:51:00 AM)

    Soulful expression.... poetic approached!

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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/8/2013 7:12:00 AM)

    Trying to be free from all lives, no more thoughts of rise and fall. Beautifully delivered. Thank you.

  • Geetha Jayakumar (9/6/2013 1:20:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem..Yes, a rise and fall in emotions. finally trying to be free from all live and to be attached to the eternal soul.. Great message. Loved it.

  • Neela Nath (9/6/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    Faeo is right.this one is didactic and of course beautiful.

  • Faeo Lyre Clive (9/5/2013 10:30:00 PM)

    Fine layers. Didactic still.

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