Rip Me Apart Poem by Carlos Daniel Neves

Rip Me Apart



rip me apart and tell me if there's any light
whatever you see don't show me what is it like
i just wanted you to know what goes on in my head
i wanted you to kow how much i've blead

and then one day when my life goes off track
you can show me how many days i still have left

i keep having this dream every night
everythings upside down but it feels so right
where you are the earth and i am the sky
and trough our love you gave birth to time

and then even tough we'll both face death
this dream will make us stronger than the rest

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Godfrey Morris 24 May 2012

Lovely poem, one with strong expressions

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