Right Under Your Nose Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

Right Under Your Nose

Rating: 5.0


It may seem so dull extraordinarily mundane
Like a movie seen yesterday to be seen again
Frame by frame alike dialogues repetitive
Seen before you go to bed heard before you leave!

But if you stop skimming the surface see it little close
There are magic happening right under your nose
She isn’t playing the same script speaking the same lines
Her colors change each hour so do her smile’s designs!

If you live the bare surface are content to stick there
You miss the subtle changes for you her redone hair
For you a coat of powder on what’s a familiar face
To move though you don’t notice in your pink favorite dress!

If you feel too weary see in changing hours no gain
Your life seems too ordinary and hopelessly mundane
You miss how she reinvents herself with you in her mind
Hoping you would see and not turn your eyes blind!

It may seem so dull extraordinarily mundane
Like a life lived yesterday to be lived today again
It’s only your turned off mind that makes it look all same
Missing out the new movies she’s building frame by frame!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 10 January 2014

To a superfluous eye, everything may look ditto, a repetition lacking novelty or even something so stale, but to a truly discerning eye, there is endless beauty and variety. Those partners who see it make their togetherness a lengthening lovely experience! A great write holding much truth! !

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Babatunde Aremu 10 January 2014

Great write, I like it. Keep the pen flowing. Do read my poems and comment

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