Rickety Rackety… Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

I have no idea why I find this funnily rude. t x

so...who got the worst of that agreement....this is clever and very cute....nice work

it appears to be like a puppet show, , , and in the end nothing happens, , , , still nice and funny, , from a good poet, ,

This naughty poem reflects of moments when one is desirous and the other is not inclined but both make amends to please the other - the desirous one let's the mood pass and the one not inclined makes an effort to comply. Well expressed in short............arya

A cute story.Liked it.A full 10 for you.

So cute Imagining a young playful couple 🤗😍

I have read many of yior old classics, but this is amazing playful. When reading, the sound is like a classic song withn a slower read, a very enjoyable poem A cute masterpiece Kesav Sir! Thank you for sharing this cute poem with a tinge of humor. I like it very much to read this Classic!

HaHa, was she pretending to sleep? And he pretending to awaken her? Rickety Rackety + Rack!

a cute piece...very joyful to read

very naughty..if caughty? ? ? written in a great mood and youthful exuberance... verty nice.....oh get a new car and dont forget the couch...; -) cheers an ten