Heather Burns

Renewing Old Ties - Poem by Heather Burns

Just as our relationship
was beginning to blossom

you turned, viewing in
another direction

after a space of absence
returning to renew old ties

but the season has changed
those ties have been broken.

Comments about Renewing Old Ties by Heather Burns

  • Gold Star - 19,125 Points Amitava Sur (1/8/2014 5:34:00 AM)

    Moral may be drawn like - - Love is very pure & delicate. Once it turns it's face it never returns with that purity............Very nice (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 11,634 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/7/2014 6:05:00 AM)

    One can't turn away and expect others to wait. Beautifully expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,337 Points Ken E Hall (1/6/2014 5:29:00 AM)

    Broken ties sure don't need the brainless ego returning to play with anyones emotions and so many men and women fall into the trap of users...great poem on ties Heather...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,503 Points Lyn Paul (1/5/2014 5:32:00 AM)

    Life can be so perfect than in an instant pure pain. Some of these ties have kept us safe but were we happy? Thank you for your words Heather (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,456 Points Valsa George (1/5/2014 5:20:00 AM)

    It is unfortunate! The snapped ties can at any time be linked together! Curt and sweet! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,662 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/4/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    Rich is a realism that is rabid yet refreshing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,243 Points Sekharan Pookkat (1/4/2014 5:16:00 PM)

    sad it is
    get new
    suited to
    new fashion (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 2, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, January 3, 2014

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