Relief-Line>>> Poem by Manonton Dalan

Relief-Line>>>

Rating: 4.5


outstretch arms along street
begging for relief whole day
screams, unnecessary exchange
heated words rumble constantly
sun not very forgiving either
cooking their skin, also sweat

police welding stick to rescue
pacify people, smoothness flow
before mid day everything gone
"back tomorrow" is written sign
heads bend down murmuring crowd
some hurled stone hit office loud

Sunday, May 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: helpless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2020

outstretch arms along street begging for relief whole day screams, unnecessary exchange heated words rumble constantly sun not very forgiving either cooking their skin, also sweat.....fantastic beginning with touching expression. Beautiful poem.10

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Manonton Dalan

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virginia, usa
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