Red-Carpet Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Red-Carpet

Rating: 4.7


I.
Oh, dulcinea! lovest thou me,
As thou art the Princess-
In the vale of distress.
Desolate are thy sky
And thy palace sans me.
II.
May that velvet- ermine kiss,
My red throne in a sheer bliss!
O, be mine and my desire
And feel my love as fire!
Rule my heart's empire.
III.
Let me crown thee with a laurel
And deck thy neck with coral.
Let me embrace in thy lotus eyes
Let thy soul sail in my Seven Seas,
In my heart's shoreless seas!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Cecile 03 December 2011

I quite enjoy the almost Victorian like use of language. The regal tone and picture it portrays is quite interesting. Good poem.

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Nicolas Thomas 03 December 2011

nice (sorry don't have much to say)

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Sajna Kailas 03 December 2011

wow! i am not at all talented to write comment on this great work! but loved its structure and style! beautiful lines! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it! ! !

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Jacqui Broad 05 December 2011

You have a big heart my friend. Seems like there's no mountain high enough, no river wide enough to keep you away from your love. Poetry is the bridge... A beautiful poem!

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Dave Walker 08 December 2011

To be in love, to desre. A great poem. Fantastic write.

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Hans Vr 15 December 2011

This one, Vipins, I truly consider to be a great piece of art. I think you strike an ace with this wonderful poetic expression of love. I fully agree with the superlatives used by the other commenters on this poem. Fantastic work, Vipins, keep writing. Hans

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Rekha Mandagere 10 December 2011

Friend I love the intelligence and dramatic technique you have marvelously displayed. I could see the blossom of another Romantic poet here. beautiful write. i must give 10+++ Rekhamandagere

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AJ Ryan 09 December 2011

You have a talent in poetry. Very well-written poem

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AJ Ryan 09 December 2011

You have a talent in poetry. Very well-written poem

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AJ Ryan 09 December 2011

You have a talent in poetry. Very well-written poem

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