Reciprocity Poem by Savita Tyagi

Reciprocity



Come reign over my heart
You say-
Have you made a place
By giving your heart away?

Saturday, January 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 03 March 2015

Truly a reciprocity with a fact also that I allow you to open up and don't hide anything whom you love. Very nice thought.

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Daniel Brick 06 February 2015

WOW! How can just a dozen and a half words create such a tension within the reader? If this begins as an invitation to love, the invited one blows it apart to reveal perhaps Bad Faith in the one offering, as if he just discarded a previous lover to make room for the new. This is the careless accumulation of conquest of a Don Juan, who has to love a thousand women because he cannot love just one.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 January 2015

Say what you mean not say what you feel. Nicely said.

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