Come reign over my heart
You say-
Have you made a place
By giving your heart away?
WOW! How can just a dozen and a half words create such a tension within the reader? If this begins as an invitation to love, the invited one blows it apart to reveal perhaps Bad Faith in the one offering, as if he just discarded a previous lover to make room for the new. This is the careless accumulation of conquest of a Don Juan, who has to love a thousand women because he cannot love just one.
Say what you mean not say what you feel. Nicely said.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly a reciprocity with a fact also that I allow you to open up and don't hide anything whom you love. Very nice thought.