Rearranged Poem by Ben Gieske

Rearranged

Rating: 2.6


parked the car
reparked the car
bought groceries & paid the bill
in the cart she rearranges them
unpacked the groceries into the closet
she rearranges them
set the table and then –
she rearranges it
washed & stacked the dishes
she rearranges them
long ago I said I do –––

now I wonder who this person is

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 03 December 2007

Ben, sneaky re-direction from her to he, & as Yoonoos suggests, says a lot without being wordy! Rgds, Ivan

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