A Mouse (Haiku) Poem by Ben Gieske

MOUSEY PUT YOUR CRASH HELMET ON FIRST LOL! Thanks Ben Love duncan X

This is as good a 'ku as i've seen on here. What else is there in the mouse's world, but that cheese? Watch out for the- (SMACK!) ...

a good haiku...poet is not self -absorbed and discrete from the object, a real haiku...

A delicate poem in exquisite taste... love, Allie xxxx

ALL THE TIME TRYING TO AVOID THE CAT... CUTE POEM!

This reflects the natural phenomenon of life. Nice.

In wintry night cat catch the crying mice is it tears or dew............... Good write........

Ben,5th place? -your haiku should have been in first place! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a ten from me...

wow a lovely haiku mouse edging to cheese -10 anjali (read mine too haikus of love)

nice one..a 'koo'ing image on the moon and the cloudy spread...10