A Party Poem by Ben Gieske

A Party

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I’m having a party
Inviting Pinocchio, Little Roo, and you.
We will celebrate
With whatever cake I can bake
And great, big vanilla shakes.

I’ll invite some others too,
Lots & lots of others - not just a few.
I’m hoping you’ll come for some fun
We’ll write some funny clerihews.

- April 22,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 28 September 2008

Sounds great, I'll bring the wine. Hmm, what rhymes with Palin?

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Aiswarya. T.anish 02 October 2008

I'll come if i can have some fun nice poem

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 03 October 2008

Wow! ...Its sounds irresistible....I'd surely be coming....

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 October 2008

The best line I liked most is 'we'll write some funny clerihews'. Sure its gonna be a nice party Ben.I'd definitely would like to part take! !

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 07 October 2008

Looking forward to the celebration Will be there without hesitation, Opps, just saw the date, Looks like I am a little too late! (couldn't resist) Loved your poem Dorothy

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Shashendra Amalshan 09 August 2009

Hey! ! this is my first visit to your page sir.. I think I m begining to enjoy this sweet, cute poems you have written this again is very nice.. lets see some other work! ! ! cheers shan

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Irene Clark-hogg 31 July 2009

It's just my point of view But I hate clerihew Though I love little Roo So I will party with you. I love your Party poem. Irene

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Catrina Heart 29 July 2009

WOW... What a great poetic treat to all your readers......Thanks! ! !

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Andre Lopez 06 July 2009

i would love to come to this party :)

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Robert Howard 13 December 2008

Ben Furrows his Brow Ben Gieske’s at it once again Ladling from his verbal fountain Whether humor or surreality A poetic treat we'll surely see.

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