Rays Of Rains Poem by Thampi KEE

Rays Of Rains

Rating: 5.0


When ever I feel as if y've known to me...
then of your kind love and gentle rays.
You're like a ray of hope to me...
after too many wet and cloudy days.


we want to cry, but you know it's lovely fear
I feel around, and dry as a desert, then rain come to us
I can feel my fear, casting down like a Waterfall.
we hear it hit ground, and your sandals all get rain

This night in the warm spring of love and this warm air
blazing my tirade against someone who doesn't
we were here shy for rain
me, it was love for you that set me
afire,

Saturday, October 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
story of cool rain to us
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 05 November 2014

This night in the warm spring of love and this warm air blazing my tirade against someone who doesn't...........................beautiful write...

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Saheb Mohapatra 23 October 2014

''When ever...................................... cloudy days ''..........really a nice presentation of your PEN..........perhaps a large adjective to RAIN...........

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Valsa George 16 October 2014

'It was love for you that set me afire'..... Very passionate and intese in emotions!

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Ramesh Rai 14 October 2014

Most excellent beautiful write.Wish you all the best.10/10

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 October 2014

Beautiful, romantic rain poured out from heart. Beautiful way you have compared love and rain. I loved the way you presented it.

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