Rain Poem by Rebecca Lyle

Rain

Rating: 4.8


Rain

Pitter patter, pitter patter,
Windshield wipers slapping,
Rapping to the beat,
Of pouring rain.

Tinkle, tinkle,
Putting me to sleep,
On the tin roof,
In our old farmhouse.

Slapping, slapping,
Hard on my head
Caught in the storm,
Trying to outrun the rain.

Whispers, whispers,
It is calling to me,
Listen to the rhythm,
Of the shadows of rain.



Rebecca Lyle ©02/11/11
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Tuesday, April 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I love listening to the rain, as I child we had a farm house with a tin roof.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 18 April 2017

Nice poem. Reminds me of my childhood days that I lived in a tin roofed house.

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Rebecca Lyle 18 April 2017

me too, thank you so much.

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Britte Ninad 27 May 2018

rhythmic - Whispers, whispers, It is calling to me, Listen to the rhythm, Of the shadows of rain. nice 10++++

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Hassan Hayati 26 August 2017

thank you for writing this poem I learn a method of writing today.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 April 2017

Whispers, whispers, calling to me, Listen to the rhythm, of the shadows of rain. These last lines i liked most in your beautiful poem It shows the innocence of your heart. Simply liked it very much dear poetess. Thankyou

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Rebecca Lyle 23 April 2017

Thank you, my friend

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Rebecca Lyle 23 April 2017

I thank you so much, my friend. I have written poetry for 50 years, this is a simple little poem but I loved that part also. I am President of the Ohio chapter of the worldwide union of Poets, there is one in every state and country.

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Full of feeling and refreshing as rain!

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 April 2017

A beautiful sound effect indeed. Thanks

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Rebecca Lyle 21 April 2017

Thank you so much, Jazib :)

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