Quit Smoking Poem by Rajnish Manga

Quit Smoking

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My father had to lose his voice,
Since he was left with no other choice.

He used to be a casual smoker,
Still he was afflicted with cancer.

Biopsy done & cancer proved,
His vocal chord was removed.

He could speak with diaphragm,
An electronic device of 200 gram.

He lived for another 20 years,
He had to pay a price my dears.

Give up smoking if you smoke,
Shun the urge, it might choke.

Friday, December 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: cancer,father,health,life and death,sad,smoking,tragedy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Profound message with a plea to quit smoking, Indeed smoking kills. Great message.

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Rajnish Manga 18 January 2019

Asim ji, thank you so much for being on this page and for sharing your views about the scourge of smoking in our society.

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Loke Kok Yee 10 February 2018

In my country, the younger generation are less incline to pick up smoking, probably because of less peer pressure. The older people who smokes are a dying generation anyway. Nevertheless, your advice in a fine poem is a timely reminder. Thank you my friend

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Rajnish Manga 10 February 2018

This is heartening to note that younger generation, everywhere, keeps itself from getting into the trap. Yes, this is because of lesser peer pressure than it used to be a couple of decades ago. Your valuable feedback and support means a lot, Dear Friend Loke.

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Seema Chowdhury 15 December 2017

Sorry about your father, thanks for sharing

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Kim Barney 31 May 2022

Excellent advice. My father also smoked when he was younger, but quit about the time he got married. He kept his old pipe in a cupboard for years but never used it. He lived to be 86.

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Varsha M 16 June 2021

Cancer is one dangerous disease. There can be oral cancer, lung cancer and then metastasis. Many more problems.

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Varsha M 16 June 2021

Sir eminent piece. Indeed smoking is injurious to health

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Indira Renganathan 16 June 2021

Losing the father is very sorrowful...but smoking and cancer be the reason for his demise is very unfortunate...a touching poem with a message for the readers

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Jagdish Singh Ramana 26 December 2020

A great message with the beautiful verse.

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