Quid Pro Quo Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Quid Pro Quo

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for emalyn

Go and leave
the rain on my eyes
let it pour 'til the sun shines.

Go and leave
the splinter in my heart
let the heart bleed 'til it dries.

Go and leave
the emblem of love with me
let it be the prize of our story.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beautiful imagery Jazlle. The splinter and the rain need to remain until things are worked through, Your last stanza is excellent. 10 love Karin

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Fay Slimm 15 October 2009

Strong words used here Joan - - may your warm heart never be splintered by hurt - - fine verse - - 10 from Fay

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