Quicksand Poem by K.. K..

Quicksand

Rating: 4.3


your love
swallows me whole
enveloping me in warmth
closing in
tighter
sucking the air from my lungs
drowning me in heat
crushing me with lust
sinking through my pores
til I am no more than a memory
in the quicksand of our love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Smith 23 February 2007

Excellent write... makes you feel like you are drawn into quicksand... Alison

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Powerful! Thanks for sharing.

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