Passionate Crime Poem by K.. K..

Passionate Crime

Rating: 3.3


driving to the rendevouz
knowing it should not happen
can't stop myself
driving
reaching there
knowing I could walk away
knowing I can't
seeing you there in the moonlight
running, knowing you are the one
can't stop my love
but must end it now
kissing you good-bye
never to see again
the tear in your eye
floating down
as if I'm flying
never seeing tomorrow
trying to reach
but just out of your grasp
disappearing into the waves below

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue angel Florida 13 July 2007

WOW IT DESERVES A HUGE 1000000... Hopefully their love wont end in such a cut.. Beautiful.

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Coleen Hayes 23 February 2007

The forbidden is always the most enticing..Wonderful write.

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Ted Sheridan 22 February 2007

Always tell someone you love good bye in the rain. Good write.

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Alison Smith 22 February 2007

Nice flowing piece... very dramatic ending.... Alison

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