Pygmalion And Galatea Poem by Marieta Maglas

Pygmalion And Galatea

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Your sight was poignantly penetrating me within.
Your blue eyes were even more bittersweet in that opaque singleness,
and our touch was like a sad piano song.

I did not know when you wanted to exist for yourself
while pretending to be existent.
I kissed you, and you thought that there was only a kiss,
but I wanted to swallow your silence,
and to blow into the air your defense.

You were dying inside you.
You loved me in this secret room of ours.
We could understand our existence.
That room kept us hidden from the world for a second.

In our dream, we became free.
We tried to free our minds and our souls,
but our dream could not generate any idea.

We made love for no other reason, but to love each other.
I became a milky white ivory Galatea of yours.
You made me be your woman for that sense of belonging.

I needed that, and I wanted my metamorphosis.
I became that Galatea not being able to leave the love cell.
In your absence, I became that Galatea wallowing in hopelessness, and
understanding that the sadness was the only thing existent inside.
I became that Galatea wanting again to see your green-blue loving eyes.

You became that Pygmalion of mine, for without me…..you…..

Poem by Marieta Maglas

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I advice you to read this poem while hearing the jazz song, ''Summertime on sax''
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maxim Muyu 02 October 2013

I like it, very lovely poem, keep up, excellent.

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Ramesh Rai 29 September 2013

Without any hesitation, i shall say an excellent write. emotions have been beautifully versed here.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 11 August 2012

I like this lines You became that Pygmalion of mine, for without me.....you..... . plus the choice words. I enjoyed reading it.

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Rich with relational realities and deep in the deluge of desire... Well done my friend!

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Ravi Sathasivam 05 August 2012

our touch was like a sadness piano song. I did not know when you really wanted to exist for yourself while pretending to be existent... I like these lines. Very beautifully written although its very painful poem. Excellent Marieta. Thanks for sharing.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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