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Rookie - 258 Points (05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

Put it all down with the wrong lenses!


Put a green lens

let me chose my glasses, please? Can I?

and I went through as well, knocking down
stepping old peels
shedding the leaves
taking away my petals

'Bem me quer, Mal me Quer'

totally alienated!

Daisies are white!
But i can't see
damn!

leafless while the time pass
And I feel ~ that anger~
arousing my Rose inside
finally i see the Red

completely ready for that!

i cant not denied myself!

Submitted: Sunday, April 28, 2013
Edited: Monday, April 29, 2013

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  • Rookie - 737 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/3/2013 9:14:00 PM)

    The sight perception is a deception when seen through a tinted lens.
    Life's reception is a juxtaposition when we are eye to eye.
    Take off and away the color schemes and you are stripped bare of all your dreams.
    Someday beyond the feign only white light will adorn our ring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 737 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/3/2013 9:13:00 PM)

    The sight perception is a deception when seen through a tinted lens.
    Life's reception is a juxtaposition when we are eye to eye.
    Take off and away the color schemes and you are stripped bare of all your dreams.
    Someday beyond the feign only white light will adorn our ring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Sekharan Pookkat (5/3/2013 12:10:00 PM)

    dear poet
    I cant agree with you dear poet. If blind or not see all in a different manner and form an opinion of our own.let knows others opinion. it will be nice to hear what others say..we have the right to accept them or not.
    Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 258 Points Poetheart Morgan (5/3/2013 11:20:00 AM)

    Dear Poet Sekharan Pookkat, try see reality is a option.sometimes we do not want to see and we are blind! I hate that, is like lose my free will or freedom! ! .
    So, better throw away the green lenses! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Sekharan Pookkat (5/3/2013 11:03:00 AM)

    Dear poet
    Observe things in a different perspective is always welcomed by others and that may be acceptable to others, Try to see them in a different angle and see the difference (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 258 Points Poetheart Morgan (5/1/2013 12:17:00 AM)

    But i can't be other person, Poet. I tried but does not work. So i want to see in Red and feel Red, sometimes. I am not a fluffy cloud. Kisses Altair and thanks. (Report) Reply

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