Private Art Gallery Poem by Nika McGuin

Private Art Gallery

Rating: 5.0


I stood so close to the painting
observing incarnate beauty in the creator's
mottled paint strokes and lush use of color
absorbed the imperfections, as perfection itself

I stood so close, I could smell the paint!
vibrant and oil-based, slightly stringent in odor
I slid my fingers across the bumpy canvas
a terrain of dark mountains and mystery
enamored by the incredible art piece

This is how I envision everyone in my life
this is how I love anyone, like a complex
work of art. Every painting has its allure
a "je ne sais quoi" which provokes awe in viewers

No matter the flaws - or perhaps
because of them, my focus
is on the highlights of people I love
those exquisite traits I admire
not readily seen at first glance

Call it realism,
call it photography:
I keep snapshots of my favorite parts of you
your best angles, your sharp profile
I hold onto the good I know is locked within

Even when it ceases to be true
even when the flaws force me to leave you
my idealized version hangs fixed where I can always find it
in my private art gallery, subtitled: "You, As Seen by Me."

Thursday, June 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: art,love,love and art,photographs,reminiscences
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Private Art Gallery - Poet Note:

It's funny the things that remain no matter what. No matter how angry, no matter how hurt we are at one point - once those feelings are resolved, we always go back to the good things. Such as: "what I liked about them, " "what I miss about this person, " etc. Despite all of the pain they may have caused you, somewhere deep down a part of you yearns to reminisce about them. Strangely enough, you might find that you're able to do so with a smile.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 29 June 2018

Nika, such a lovely poem👍👍👍

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Robert Murray Smith 28 June 2018

A great poem that has expressiveness in a painting.++10 Robert

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Bill Cantrell 28 June 2018

You my friend are a really good poet! ! You connected with the spirit of the artist of the painting...the emotions and by doing this...the author is speaking through you as you are speaking through your poetry! ! I love this poem! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 June 2018

This poem resonates with me on how you look at a particular painting. Paintings always strike my eye. I liked the way you relate with your life. Wonderful thoughts have been embedded in this marvelous write. Beautifully crafted write.10++++++

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