Priceless Discovery! Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Priceless Discovery!

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Barely conscious
Or hardly caring which way
I face the World,
I took a border step,
Traveling steadily
Against the furious wind
That was sometimes too strong
And so cold it mumbled my senses
Until I felt myself
Completely turned inside out...

I tried to keep the direction
That I have set for
So that somehow,
I will arrive somewhere
Knowing that this path
I have followed faithfully
Has brought me to a state of mind
Where I have proudly
Become myself...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

beautiful n sheer brilliance...

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Heather Wilson 10 April 2012

That was a good journey, you should be proud, an enjoyable read.

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Wahab Abdul 09 April 2012

the path is followed faithfully......by you.....become yourself.................marvellous..........never no one should left his own path................

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Valerie Dohren 04 April 2012

To become yourself is a great achievement, and this is a brilliant piece.

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Bella Hernandez 03 April 2012

Wonderful! ! ! sometimes in life and when young we lose our selves to fit in and to be unjudged throught society. and when wanting to be our selves again, sometimes its too late to find Us. nicely written Romeo :) ~Bella

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