shveta sahal


Predicament - Poem by shveta sahal

I am groping in darkness,
Let me not witness light,
I am all but lost,
Let me not find way,
I am happy in ignorance,
Let me not get knowledge,
Happy with company of my tears,
Let not happiness make me lonely….


Comments about Predicament by shveta sahal

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (2/6/2013 3:51:00 AM)

    I am no one to criticise your work, but having read a few of your poems, I think you have the feel for life, don't dilute your ink of expression with tears, they normally get nothing, result into nothing, and are over emphasised sodium chloride aqueous solutions. Burn the tears by the fire within. Write on. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 44,572 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/6/2013 3:12:00 AM)

    I am all but lost. good one. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 6, 2013


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