Portrait Poem by Sathya Narayana

Portrait

Rating: 4.7


PORTRAIT
A lurid looking impasto indeed
With grisly colors dappled all over
Like puddles of cuddled blood
Daubs of violent reds! Gloomy black patches!
Erotic blues and skinflint browns!
Resigned auspicious yellows,
Ashen virtuous whites and
Paled prosperous greens

He is often slipping his palette
Dripping the hues and tripping the easel
His lines running in zigzag jumble
Drawing He, with his quivering quill
The frazzled veteran Artist of unknown origin
“Your mighty hand must be aging! Oh my Master!
Muster your energies to depict on Earth
Your best ever portrait to reinvigorate
Your original beautiful oeuvre in whole for ever”

Sathya…….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 17 November 2008

I like how this poem reads with “dappled all over/ Like puddles of cuddled blood/” the best lines. With all the colors there is a lot of appeal to the senses. The word, “lurid” and “erotic” stand out for me. A nice change of pace with the quotation. Well done.

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David Harkins 08 November 2008

Interesting poem. Full of energy.

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008

A description of a portrait with which I might well agree, were I to see it. Well described. Almost too well. A thing which makes my judgement easy about one art. The one practiced here. GW62

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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