Point Of No Return Poem by Lwe Qew

Point Of No Return

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on this point do i sit with no one but my self for companionship
thinking of days past and present
feeling like living life is my sentence
People have told me i shall not succeed
They know not or do not care
How naive i was to think this world was fare
Now i stand at the edge of the great abyss
To forget my sorrows is my wish
now i must rest my weary brain
and then maybe one day ill wake up with no more pain

Thursday, March 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: abandoned,crazy,depression,loneliness,lonely,sad,saddened,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 12 January 2018

People have told me i shall not succeed They know not or do not care How naive i was to think this world was fare.. expectation, sense of achievement and the sense of loss and dissatisfaction....... loneliness. sadness and depression..... so well portrayed dear poet. thank you. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 April 2017

A point of no return is a good start. Thanks

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