Getting Warm Poem by Lwe Qew

Getting Warm

Rating: 4.3


I am fire i am ice
I am he who paid the price
Though that is the toll to live in paradise

All i did was let her cry on my shoulder
Our time together made me grow bolder
But when it ended i did grow colder

But though thought and talk
i do feel fine
All i know is these things take time
But at this point i've never felt better

Monday, April 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 27 April 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Lwe. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 April 2018

All i did was let her cry on my shoulder Our time together made me grow bolder But when it ended i did grow colder.. love and pain portrayed so well. a fine poem dear poet. thank u. tony

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