Poetry/Writing Poem by Emma Alberts

Poetry/Writing



Blank page
Pencil ain't grooving
Mind is weak
The gears aren't moving

Slowly being filled
One line at a time
Sometimes it's hard
To keep these lines in rhyme

But eventually
I complete, finish the page
Now for the hard part
Reading it on stage

(Winter 2008, Age 11, Wisconsin)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aaron Combs 03 February 2008

ha it's pretty good... one thing...it loose a slightly on rhyme at the end... could you please comment my poems as well?

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