Poetry, She Appears To Me In A Wild State Poem by Captain Cur

Poetry, She Appears To Me In A Wild State

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Discovering this truth a quietness
assails me, what measure of beauty did I find?
When her eyes serenely soft express
the artificial nature of my rhyme.
She appears to me in a wild state
shorn of all garments save the virgin cloth;
whilst in her bed on the verge of ecstasy,
in these false imaginings I am lost.

Thursday, June 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,self discovery
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is the second poem from the Poetry Series:
The first poem titled: Poetry, The Flowing Outreach Of Her Rhyme
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 11 July 2018

Poetry devoid of all artificiality, in her nude form entices and takes us to sudden bouts of ecstasy! Who will not be charmed by her seductive naked grandeur! Beautiful flights of fancy!

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Savita Tyagi 30 June 2018

The wild nature of poetry.... it’s ecstasy has touched us ever so softly.....

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Captain Cur 01 July 2018

Softly yet loudly! Thank you Savita for your gracious comment.

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Rini Shibu 29 June 2018

Wonderful poem about imaginations which turns into poetry

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Captain Cur 29 June 2018

Thanks Rini! Who can ever tame the wild state of Poetry.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2018

A brilliant poem nicely executed. Touching with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Captain Cur 29 June 2018

Thanks Kumarmani, the beauty of poetry assails us all.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 June 2018

Captain Cur, such a well crafted poem...10+++

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Captain Cur 29 June 2018

Thank you Bernard for visiting and taking the time to comment.

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