Please Say It Poem by Michelle Pope

Please Say It

Rating: 4.0


Take a gun
And shoot my head
But say 'I love you'
Before I'm dead

Don't let me leave
Thinking it's a lie
Just say 'I love you'
Before I die

Take my body
Burry it in peace
But say 'I love you'
Before I cease

Come and Visit
Day by day
But say 'I love you'
As you walk away

Don't let them think
You did it in hate
You said 'I love you'
This was my fate

You did it in love
Just like I asked
You said 'I love you'
As I passed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cassandra Howell 13 December 2005

Grusome? ? OKAY we'll log thata way then hommie! This one has alot to say and alot of meaning! It's great

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Ernestine Northover 22 November 2005

A bit gruesome Michelle, but an excellent write. Love Ernestine

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Declan McHenry 11 November 2005

Nice, simple, effective and emotive. Well done Michelle.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

Very powerful stuff from a magnificent young poet - keep it up!

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