'Please Don't Give Up' Poem by Lyn Paul
'Please Don't Give Up'
Your needed here... Please don't give up..
You have an offering to pass on to others like you.
You can, you will, one day soon you will be proud of how you grew.
I'm sure mama needs you, Yet does not know how to show it..
Daddy has been hurting you, you show no pain, Your teeth you grit.
You need to prove to yourself, You can make it through this Hell,
In some incredible way you need to realise.........you can fall no more... you are climbing from that Well.
The well of the hurt, the suffering and the sorrow,
To get right out of that well. There is a new tomorrow!
You must see sunshine; Even if you may onlysee rain,
Believe that there truly is.. Something, something to gain.
You've gotta believe to not give up, to know your life can turn around,
How ever deep the bucket, A real life can be found!
Found because you deserve it and there is reason you are on this earth..
You must believe in yourself, for all you are worth.
But in the overall picture, learn to open your heart...
This will be the beginning to healing - A new start.
Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL
Great philosophy Lyn - we all need to feel that we have something of value to offer? I believe in this philosophy, but it is often difficult to actually live it. Well penned.
I love this line You can, you will, one day soon you will be proud of how you grew...and the message with the note just great for all people to read, understand and take_Soul
Not to give up and to believe that we all have some thing special in us is a great philosophy! Loved the beautiful write and the summing up is creditable.
This poem carries a good piece of advice... appreciated!
when I imagine the scene depicted in this poem, it is so perfect! an interesting poem for youngsters, who are in trouble!
Have an indomitable spirit and never give up! There can be once again sunshine in life! ! A very inspirational write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/30/2024 5:46:09 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Your message is truly encouraging. As there is rain and sunshine - both needed- the same is necessary to be recognized and accepted in people's daily life. Through determination, inner strength, faith, one should believe There is a new tomorrow! Lovely message. Good luck! Maria