Playing With Poetry Poem by Sk. Nurul Huda

among some of the parts i might change a bit to make it more clear to ME: Then why I follow many to quit it in haste? *** Is it not that hardly it feed to stomach but mind? **** Then devouring it why some become so kind? ***** *** here, do you mean you start to read some poems, but don't finish reading them, but quit soon after starting? i've done that with a few poems; not many! ****are you saying poetry is digested, not by the stomach, but by the brain/mind? I’d have to agree, especially since most poetry I read is now online; I have eaten paper in my lifetime (mostly cupcake wrappers) , but I don’t relish eating a monitor. *****do you mean the readers, OR the poems, become kind? and, though kind rhymes nicely with mind, kind doesn't seem like the right 'fit' for the line. again, as i've said to others before, rhyming sometimes can cause the meaning/sense of a poem to suffer [in MY opinion]. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “Are these not, only a few of fame from a list huge? ” …..are you saying that there is a huge list of the very positive things poetry has to offer its readers? ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I am glad you are writing in English. For one thing, that is the language I understand best. Also, it will help you to become even more proficient at communicating to people like me through your poetry. Yes, for some readers, poetry is powerful, influencing their thoughts and sometimes actions. For me it is more entertainment, which is NOT a bad thing! Thanks for sharing. Bri :)

this is interesting and interesting. i'll plan to look again, look again. i just don't know when, or when! bri :)

calling the powerful the powerless, a ploy of the ignorant or wise?