Sunny morn it was
Sudden cloud, storm upto evening,
Had these been in morn!
sunny morn as a pleasant welcoming........ then the storm....... so is life. all that is pleasant and sad comes in our lives. you have pictured life in a wonderul way through your great poem...... short and sweet my dear poet......... tony
Thank you...now I feel happy...calm...getting you o..I am inspired.....
every starting shows the outcome but the " SUDDEN" in starting changes the whole
An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely encapsulated - a beautiful Haiku. Thanks for sharing SK and do remain blessed.
Reality! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
you write elusive. in a comment, Kumarmani Mahakul writes illusive. HERE IS WHAT I FOUND ONLINE about the two words: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Choose Your Words Caught between words? Make the right choice. elusive/ illusive An elusive fairy is one you can't catch, but an illusive one was never really there at all. It was just an illusion! Anything elusive is hard to get a hold of. It eludes you. Existentialism, love, and small rodents are among things people find elusive. If you can't understand what nothingness is, find that special someone, or catch the little mouse who eats your cake at night, then those things are elusive. Some examples: Predicting extreme events any further than 10 days in advance has long been an elusive goal for meteorologists. (Scientific American) He proved an elusive foe for law enforcement. (Reuters) Something illusive, on the other hand, is not real, even if it seems to be. The word illusive is used mostly in literature, where we find our favorite illusions. If flickering candlelight is casting scary shadows on the wall, don't worry, those are illusive villains. They aren't really there. Check out some examples from literature: Then he knew it was an illusion of his eyes, straining suddenly in that illusive light. (Charles George Douglas Roberts) But though all my rural visions had proved illusive, there were some very substantial realities. (Harriet Beecher Stowe) Although both words can apply to things you don't have, don't let the difference be elusive! You can't quite catch something elusive, but illusive things are just illusions. The word illusive is less common. It likes to hang around the library, where it can be easily caught. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - some of the meaning of this poem may be elusive for me. or maybe not elusive at all! i would say up to, meaning until (in some cases) , but i guess upto is an allowable variant of 'up to'. Had these been in morn! ..............i want to think that this is an exclamation indicating that if the clouds/storm had been in the morning, then the morning would not have had such pleasant (sunny) weather. bri :)
Happy to send u a comment and gave u a big 10. i did not forget you my dear...... please forgive m e....... here after i shall read and comment..... we shall be great poet friends......... thankyou. tony God bless you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sunny morn it was Sudden cloud, A good thought.............
Thank you very muchmuch.....have a happy pen.