Photography ~ Fotografija Poem by Jankovic Zoran
Photography ~ Fotografija
Photography
She woke up and looked out the window:
With trepidation came out
clear, morning sun because
he was afraid of restless clouds.
Clouds are a symbol of infidelity,
The sun is the source of life.
The women took the phone and make a photo,
beautiful game of impossible love.
She turned and continued to dream.
One might think that
she was frightened for her fate,
but I know she's just lazy to write
and, probably, like to sleep.
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Fotografija
Probudila se i pogledala je kroz prozor:
Sa strepnjom je izlazilo
bistro, jutarnje sunce
jer su ga plašili nemirni oblaci.
Oblaci su simbol nevjernosti,
a sunce je izvor života.
Uzela je telefon i slikala je
prelijepu igru nemoguće ljubavi.
Okrenula se i nastavila da sanja.
Neko bi mogao pomisliti
da se uplašila sudbine,
ali ja znam da je ona
samo lijena da piše poeziju
a, vjerovatno, voli da spava.
This poem is dedicated to the woman who knows how to write beautifully but is lazy to do it. She has an excuse because she is a painter who, when sleepy, only takes photo and continues to dream.
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Fotografija: Snežana Krstić
Ova pjesma je posvećena ženi koja zna lijepo da piše ali je lijena da to radi. Ona ima opravdanje zato jer je slikarka koja kad je pospana samo fotografiše i nastavi da sanja.
Nice poem, beautiful photograph. Congratulations on Member POD. Well-deserved. Top score
A marvelous poem on a dear one with sweet complaints about the nature. Well deserved poem of the day. Congrats for POD selection twice.
Nice poem cougars on pod, you may like too read my poems, shutter seed and through the lense. Cheers kb
she awoke and looked to outside, since she is a paintress, she only takes a photo then go to sleep/ to dream again. He writes the poem based upon the view of that moment and dedicates the poem to her. This must be love. Thank you so much for sharing, beautiful sunset and Congratulations on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, hooray for Jankovic Sir.
error: in the first line: .............then GOES to sleep/ to dream again.............thank you!
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I like ur imagination but you must carefully observe the punctuation and grammar. Like " Frightened" isn't a verb. Good imagery by the way.
He didn't use it as a verb. He used it as an adjective (which it is) but he should have used the verb IS in front of it: One might think that she is frightened...
Punctuation is important
Once upon a time my father telling me that I speak English as Tarzan. I did not make much progress. I corrected the error. Thank you for suggestions and comments.