Philosophical Musings On Nothing Of Major Consequence Poem by David DeSantis

Philosophical Musings On Nothing Of Major Consequence

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Discomfort
Is a unique measurement
Of self-esteem.

When discomforted,
one is bound to question
the reason for achieving
such an unhappy state.

By default,
discomfort
is likely to force positive,
or negative corrective actions.

If of the low-self
Mindset,
One's "Self" is ultimately assumed
To be of negative
Proportions
And thus unchangeable
in long term prospects.

Discomfort is seen as
a simple fact of existence,
and ones every day
activities,
are tailored to embrace
it.

However,

If of the high-self
Mindset,
"Self"
is unlikely to tolerate
a situation
in which discomfort
is prolonged.
Thus,
Forcing an acceptable
Outcome to a situation
Breeding discomfort.

Life
Is forged by actions
built from
differing
levels of self-esteem.

Just as
A dictator is often short,
A President is usually tall.

I'm quite sure
That all major negative
Military decisions,
Economic catastrophes,
Mass genocides,
And scurrilous inventions
(such as Rap and Teletubbies)

Could have been avoided
If
As a child
Ones parents
Encouraged,
High discomfort
And positive self-esteem.


Copyright (c) David DeSantis

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Xxx Xxx 15 May 2008

the open lines made me think a lot...I think this is a materialistic point of view but so real in every aspect of life

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Interesting conclusion, persuasively reached...it's hard to disagree. t x

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LOVEFOOL Aka 15 May 2008

Very deep very thought provoking and a little bit dark nice work Thanks Nik

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Rani Turton 15 May 2008

These musings of yours David certainly make the neurones work. Maybe not at precisely 10 AM but all the same...great stuff. Thanks.

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R H 16 May 2008

Musings that have the reader nodding in agreement here...the opening statement is explored, ruminated and projected as the poem expands until a satisfying conclusion is reached. justine.

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Pinaki Dewan 29 October 2018

Amazing work. Love the witticism and piercing outlook on self-esteem and discomfort.

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Estrella Baldemosa 29 May 2008

yes...this 'itch' signals that something has to be done from the micro to macro, to be able to transcend, from infancy to adulthood...

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Ben Gieske 27 May 2008

Good thing it is only 10 AM. I have the rest of the day to delve into this philosophy and test its premise. I don't disagree but want to think about all of its ramifications. There are some things we cannot control which cause us discomfort, so how do we deal with those? Is it a question of mind over matter or allowing time for disappation.

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Michael Campbell 22 May 2008

love this poem man. i see the point and i agree. i freaking hate teletubbies too

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Original Unknown Girl 21 May 2008

Wonderfully philosophical and introspective but much wisdom from such young shoulders (have you been here before David?) Excuse the condescending tone, not meant at all, I am just wowed by this poem's prodfundity! Love it.. HG: -) xx

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