Ph: Life: Ode To A Missing Beer Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Life: Ode To A Missing Beer

Rating: 5.0


Oh, this is an ode to my friend's missing beer,
Gone missing in fact because he isn't here,
The pizza's consumed and I've sated my thirst,
For pizza and beer are quite often rehearsed.
I'm writing this poem and singing its praise,
So he will be sorry the rest of his days.

The pizza was tangy (beer cold as he feared) ,
The longer he tarried the more disappeared,
When friends cannot make it remember this test,
Though company's fun, a full stomach is best.
Can't say that I've given much thought to his plight,
The one thing for sure is I'll sleep good tonight.


Brian Johnston
February 7,2017

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 February 2017

favorite lines: Oh, this is an ode to my friend's missing beer, Gone missing in fact because he isn't here, and When friends cannot make it remember this test, Though company's fun, a full stomach is best. to MyPoemList, and, because it is YOU, i'll rate it also: 9 1/2.........call it 10. bri :) ========================================== this part of my comment is the same as i just sent to you in a message: Brian, i'm loving this one. did he ever find out? are you forgiven? ? my only suggestion for a change: The one thing for sure is I’ll sleep good tonight. maybe: The one thing for sure is I’ll sleep. Good night! But WAIT, i see that i misread I'll sleep good tonight as I'll sleep good night! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! my error! ! ! ! NOW i 'love' the WHOLE POEM. i'll get it into Feb. Section B (i think B) showcase soon, maybe tonight. my mate gave me more time on computer because i was a good boy today and she got a late start fixing supper (not that it was broken!) . bri :)

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