Ph: Faith: I'm A Christian; You're A Christian Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Faith: I'm A Christian; You're A Christian

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I'm a Christian; you're a Christian; fine with me you don't think so,
You're a child of God that loves you, '…Out of Jail…, ' 'Advance to Go, '
Few would claim, 'We've got no limits! ' Boundaries? Of course, there are!
Earth (for now) God's children's playground, daylight honors just one star.

Poetry is where I hang out most of these retirement days
just dip toes in to taste my humor, faith, and logic (Science craze!)
Though rhythms here I deem a virtue, all man's rules seem slightly bent
by mass that acts in four dimensions. (1) Talk to God (Who owns) , I rent!

I'm a poet; you're a poet! Models guide; God's TRUTH's unknown,
for God loves atheists/agnostics. Your 'Faith' makes you judge of me?
'Wax on, wax off, ' (2) I'm just a novice! Pope, too, sits by telephone
(still begging God to call him someday!) Science, Bible's poetry!

Bible's faults amped by translators, both first texts AND minds of man.
All the prophets birthed with baggage! Hitlers think their thoughts are fine!
Science texts aren't just translations; peer reviews check all they can
(don't rely on 'truths' but Nature!) Satan spawns no Valentine. (3)


Brian Johnston
November 19,2022
Poet's Notes:
A fun collage of meter and rhyme. Check it out!
(1) How amazing it is to me that modern Physics has revealed that in God's reality it seems that gravity is not a real but a 'fictitious force' and that the 'speed of light' cannot actually be measured on a 'one-way trip' (only inferred) as techniques for
measuring speed all require the light to make a 'round trip.'
(2) A defensive metaphor taught by Mr. Miyagi to Daniel, his protégé, in the motion picture 'The Karate Kid.'
(3) Satan is commonly called 'The Father of the Lie! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 26 November 2022

We now live in a finite, overpopulated world, and a climate damaged by man through his greed. What next as this is too early in the day for my brain to start working!

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David Wood 26 November 2022

as it began to spin forming the sun in the centre of the nebula leaving the Earth in the ‘goldilocks' zone, and probably Mars too. Life began and evolved over eons through natural selection as Darwin discovered. Cont'd

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David Wood 26 November 2022

Interesting poem. I think God would agree with me that it was gravity that started the creation of everything. Gravity caused the dust and gas of the solar nebula around 4.6 billion years ago to collapse in on itself cont'd.

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