Petaled Perfection. Poem by Fay Slimm

Petaled Perfection.

Rating: 5.0


Cupped in greenery,
......................... it stands tall as 'itself'.
Bud-tight, becoming unfurled
................................. with blushy show,
Bright rose, strongly fragile,
.............................. returns my melting
Sighs with quiet pride of face,
........................................ so knowingly.

Sweet silence colours it
......................... and rich tones vibrate,
The rose holds a beauty
.............from friendship's warm hand.
Dignified more by it's image,
............................................ now fated
To bloom here for me
.............................. as in faraway land.

Impassioned, compelling,
................................ incarnadine rose,
How deep your secret
...................... only providence knows.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 21 October 2009

Your last verse says it all..lovely written poem! ! ! Thanks...........

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Sandra Martyres 25 October 2009

Truly awesome...I too can see the perfect rose before me...10+++

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Georgia Girl 21 October 2009

Gorgeous! ! I can see the rose right in front of me, beautiful descriptions...10

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Bob Gibson 21 October 2009

Colours blended, from dawns first light hues of yellow and orange delight its perfume, inhaled, garnished with love all senses on fire, a gift from above

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Tom Balch 21 October 2009

Lovely work Fay, has to be a ten,10/10 regards Tom

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Carol Gall 21 October 2009

the beauty of your words holds me with awe 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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