Peerless Poetess Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Peerless Poetess

Rating: 5.0


all these blank verses
she was about to voice
under aegis of love
O dear, look alive!

above wandering earth and sky
it goes its own righteous way
it’s relaxed more and more
we will remember evermore

stay with me
O baby, stay with me
thank you, my baby
for loving me

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Hema Kadir)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 23 May 2009

You have penned great poems of dedication i am just wondering why all poems now coming from you have the same end stanzas.........

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Saadat Tahir 23 May 2009

hi Ahmad its so nice to say kind an nice words about our own community...and written so well cheers

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Michael Gale 23 June 2009

Nicely done. MJG... Of the world, of poetry.

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a nice feelig written in nice way. shan

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Alf Hutchison 30 May 2009

We should all indeed give thanks especially to those who love us.. well done Alf

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 May 2009

stay with me O baby, stay with me thank you, my baby for loving me This is the burden of every song at the end.

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Naidz Ladia 23 May 2009

a nice dedication to a nice poetess..cheers, , naizz

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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