Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 34,918 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Patience Which I Find In Women


Patience which I find in women, find no where
They are the holy earth on this earth, is it clear?
Love existed in many forms, motherly love, uniform
For rich or poor or moderate, love, that never harm

Whenever, I parted off, found, ocean of love, on her
Eyes, her do’s and don’ts do’s annoyed me, but I
Knew and felt and controlled my dew, complete blur
From the world except her face, worth to love to die.

Women is the core element of the family, a boon
A love hub, a heavenly power house, hug, lub-dub.
Mother Mary a symbol for women in this universe
Why can’t we behave like Jesus, refer holy verse

Patience is the womb of silence, we must remember
And heart is the universe that keeps love and slumber//

Submitted: Friday, August 30, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 03, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 9,601 Points Heather Wilkins (8/30/2013 4:39:00 PM)

    women are the hub of the family (along with a strong husband) they are the home maker care taker money manager chef the mother wife counselor trainer teacher and lover a lot of responsibilities for one person. your poem depicts these things well. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,642 Points Sallam Yassin (8/30/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    patience and peace in the womb
    in the women the life
    we found/ great piece for the mother and her love (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,513 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/30/2013 10:08:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with deep meaning...especially the words. Patience is the womb of silence...
    So many beautiful description you have given, I feel some positivity..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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