Paradise Lost Poem by Lora Colon

Paradise Lost

Rating: 5.0


The dragons of Eden claw at my heart,
They give me no relief;
I agreed to this, and like a good slave
I pretend he's Adam and I'm Eve

I go through the motions, doing what I'm told,
I've a promise to fulfill;
But I can't continue this masquerade,
I'm tired, and I've lost the will

Lord, open the gate and let me leave,
Don't make me complete this task;
I have no love left to give this man,
I cannot do what you ask

Now the fruit on the tree is rotting,
The garden was never a delight;
I obeyed your laws as best I could -
Take this burden from me tonight

Forgive me, I can no longer serve you,
Banish me from this garden, O Lord;
Let me go to the one who owns my heart,
And Paradise will be restored!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 12 March 2014

The poem is simply beautiful! 10/10. 'Let me go to the one who owns my heart, And Paradise will be restored! ' - Humans think like this, God otherwise.

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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2013

a lovely poem inspired by the garden of eden. nice work

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Valerie Dohren 20 May 2013

A beautiful poem Lora, a very clever and inspired write. Well done.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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