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Brittney Pennington

Rookie - 21 Points (19/12/1991 / Crourd 'd lane)

Painful Goodbye


Tears form in my heart
Silent roll down my cheek
Stopping gently on the lips
That will never know your kiss
I said goodbye when I didn't mean it
Now I must bury the truth deep inside my soul
For my love must never be revealed

Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2014
Edited: Monday, April 14, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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  • Gold Star - 12,331 Points Chinedu Dike (9/21/2014 1:11:00 AM)

    You captured the intimacy, the pain, during and after saying goodbye. An insightful and beautifully penned piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.10 marks for you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,468 Points John Westlake (4/17/2014 4:47:00 PM)

    A good play on words used here. Maybe the person who this is about should read this and know how you feel. Strong write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points C. P. Sharma (4/13/2014 11:09:00 PM)

    Deep agony of parting and a sense of repentance is ruefully reflected in this poem. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,355 Points Mohammad Skati (4/13/2014 6:41:00 PM)

    I loved your poems, so I translated THE PAINFUL GOODBYE and I LOVE YOU THROUGH THE DARK. You are a great poetess. Bravo. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Yash Shinde (4/13/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    .......a deep soulful write, sometimes love is hidden deep inside our heart, but we are afraid of unleash the truth............the pain and anxiety, then slowly eats us from inside...............lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points V P Mahur (4/13/2014 9:35:00 AM)

    Dear Brittney,
    The poem reveals the sorrowful feels of love in an impressive way. Your heart is so soft to feel the gloom of love so deeply. I can understand. Thanks! (Report) Reply

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