Brittney Pennington

Rookie - 23 Points (19/12/1991 / Crourd 'd lane)

Painful Goodbye Poem by Brittney Pennington


Tears form in my heart
Silent roll down my cheek
Stopping gently on the lips
That will never know your kiss
I said goodbye when I didn't mean it
Now I must bury the truth deep inside my soul
For my love must never be revealed

Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2014
Edited: Monday, April 14, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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  • Gold Star - 21,071 Points Chinedu Dike (9/21/2014 1:11:00 AM)

    You captured the intimacy, the pain, during and after saying goodbye. An insightful and beautifully penned piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.10 marks for you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Ambitious Blessing (4/22/2014 12:56:00 PM)

    I almost cried it's so painful ...keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 309 Points Shania K. Younce (4/17/2014 11:24:00 PM)

    This is well written poem. Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,246 Points John Westlake (4/17/2014 4:47:00 PM)

    A good play on words used here. Maybe the person who this is about should read this and know how you feel. Strong write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (4/14/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    You play with words very well, keep on writing and be stronger too_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,354 Points Patricia Grantham (4/14/2014 7:34:00 AM)

    A painful but very passionate write. Feeling
    the pain of an unpleasant goodbye. Very heartfelt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 92 Points C. P. Sharma (4/13/2014 11:09:00 PM)

    Deep agony of parting and a sense of repentance is ruefully reflected in this poem. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,087 Points Mohammad Skati (4/13/2014 6:41:00 PM)

    I loved your poems, so I translated THE PAINFUL GOODBYE and I LOVE YOU THROUGH THE DARK. You are a great poetess. Bravo. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,313 Points Jesus James Llorico (4/13/2014 10:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful description of painful feeling of regret. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (4/13/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    .......a deep soulful write, sometimes love is hidden deep inside our heart, but we are afraid of unleash the truth............the pain and anxiety, then slowly eats us from inside...............lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,811 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/13/2014 10:06:00 AM)

    I said goodbye when I didn't mean it
    Love's deep secret beautifully expressed in the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 659 Points V P Mahur (4/13/2014 9:35:00 AM)

    Dear Brittney,
    The poem reveals the sorrowful feels of love in an impressive way. Your heart is so soft to feel the gloom of love so deeply. I can understand. Thanks! (Report) Reply

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