Our Love Poem by Brittney Miller

Our Love

Rating: 3.0


Our love is like the world.
Our love stands strong like the solders,
But is as gentle as a new born baby.
As the stars fall we wish for world peace.
when hurricanes rage your
Arms is the shelter that I run too.

our love is like the universe
your the sun and I'm pulled
into your gravitational field
Your the atmosphere that protects
me from the asteroids

our love is like the heavens
When our lips meet the angels sing
when I turn into a rain cloud
your the sun that appears to dry my eyes
For you are my love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 25 September 2009

Poem is very expansive on loves dimensions. With the cradle of protection as the lining. - nice - KEEP TRUCKIN

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 September 2009

a lovely poem on love...soldier and a gentle baby....the sun to dry up the rain clouds...very well done....deserves a 10

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Abdul Athani 25 September 2009

what a nice poem indeed i liked it 10+++

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