I Love You Through The Dark Poem by Brittney Miller

I Love You Through The Dark

Rating: 4.3


Love comes and goes
life fades into death
pain lingers in the air
the light burns out
the clouds rain
yet through it all
I cling to you
your touch keeps me strong
your kiss keeps me moving forward

Monday, April 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Love comes and goes... nice lines Come in for closeness as such In way to require so much To give fulfillment And form close movement So come in agreement And present With clear mind And certainly find

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 April 2014

Keeps me moving forward. Nice positive feeling. Thank you.

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Yash Shinde 13 April 2014

....nice beautiful lines......a lovely, passionate write

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Khairul Ahsan 13 April 2014

The title is attractive. The last four lines justify the title.

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Bill Cantrell 13 April 2014

Nice write, even in darkness the gates of love are not closed. I like it.

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William Lindenmuth 05 September 2018

Even in the darkest moment love conquers all a brief poem with a strong message

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Chinedu Dike 04 December 2014

A beautiful love poem, well articulated and written with conviction to capture the bliss of true love in the inner recesses of the heart. A lovely one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Lutful Sadiq Mim 13 May 2014

Nice poem...i like it so much...

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Patricia Grantham 14 April 2014

Love pierces through the darkness. Can't be hidden always a glow. Touching.

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C. P. Sharma 13 April 2014

Lovely love lyric guides through the darkness in life. A nice write.

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