Out Of Reach Poem by Lesley Merrin

Out Of Reach



The purple cyclamens bloom.
She's not there to tend them:
They grow awry
Not cultivated as before.

The Linnets nest nearby, unaware,
Bloodied fuschias are heavy in flower,
Drooping appropriately.
Her footsteps no longer echo on the stone.

The sweet music of the thrush goes unheard,
The cheeky wren unseen
Except by friends
Who come to tidy the once kempt garden.

Her life continues but
Her head is in another place
No one can reach her
Hope does not die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Davies 04 April 2010

Oh what a very sad glimpse of life; the colourful, bustling garden thriving, life going, on whilst her presence has ceased, her own life fading. This is life, life does go on, but you have used the juxtaposion beautifully - I really feel the loss....

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Sean Williams 01 April 2010

I really admire the way you've combined such rich imagery and vivid colours with a moving sense of pathos/melancholia.

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John Fieldson 19 February 2010

such beautiful words and imagery - perfect 10+

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Sara Tehrani 04 June 2009

So deep, elegant and endearing. lovely read. :)

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