Haiku 1 Poem by Lesley Merrin

Haiku 1



Unashamedly,
Love was what I felt for him,
He rejected me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Sellen 29 January 2012

I like this - short and sweet though says a lot. Similar to my series of whims (a lovers whim, an ex lover's whim and so on) - simple but effective. Probaby almost every reader would have experienced such at one time or other in their lives

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Sean Williams 01 April 2010

Absolutely brilliant. So much emotion and feeling in such a short poem.

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Kim Davies 19 March 2010

Fabulous Lesley, very powerful.

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Kim Davies 19 March 2010

Fabulous Lesley, very powerful.

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