Our Time. Poem by Fay Slimm

Our Time.

Rating: 5.0


Rainbowing sky is fading.
Sandy dunes move slightly
While shivering
In the evening breeze,
The sea-grass whispers night.

Arms linked, we walk easily
Hearts beating in unity.
Ebbtide singing
Floods us with it's peace.
Our time has just begun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Kempson 22 November 2009

Nice sweet reflective poem Fay 10 Daniel

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Tsira Goge 22 November 2009

Fay, Is so fine...The rainbow only will be sign of happiness.. 10.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Patti Masterman 22 November 2009

An intriguing and inviting atmosphere lives here in this one, Fay. (smile)

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Bursting with beauty.....

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Stephen Stirk 05 December 2009

Beautiful, with a element of British coastline, that I can relate to. A warm piece Best Steve 10

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David Harris 26 November 2009

Fay, loved the soft romantic feel with this beautiful poem as it takes us with the lovers along a quiet beach. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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fine poem on developing love.. :)

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Marieta Maglas 22 November 2009

Out time has just begun. wonderful descriptive analytical poem 10++++++++++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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